Thursday 14 April 2016

Haunted House Description.




The old abandoned, haunted house was dark and eerie. It was empty and covered with sickening cobwebs and disgusting, gross insects. It looked like one of those places you wouldn’t be able to fix if you tried.


It smelt of dead fish and stinky socks. If you were to walk into it you would be sticking a peg on your nose pretty quick. It was an  atrocious smell that shouldn’t even exist.


It’s a petrifying thought just thinking about how someone used to live in there. I was so scared that I started sweating and whenever I opened my mouth a bit of sweat dripped onto it. I took a few deep breaths but when I breathed out dust flew everywhere and then I breathed back in all I could taste was the old, old dust.


Every step I took the floorboards would creak. It was a strange creek because along with the creaking sound from the old floorboard it also scraped against the board next to it.

It was scary and I will never walk through it again.

Monday 11 April 2016

Grilled Cheese Description.

The perfectly golden cheese makes my mouth water just thinking about it while it grilled.The bubbly cheese is oozing off the sides of the bread.


I hear the popping, crackling sound as the bubbles on the cheese break apart. The oily cheese just keeps on popping.


The squishy cheese and burnt toast tastes marvellous together. The squishy, rubbery cheese stretches as the toast gets broken in half. The burnt bread sticks to the plate under it from the cheese that has dripped off the sides.

For the few seconds before it was all gone it smelt delectable.